This is not what you may think. We were suppose to write about “The thing we find most beautiful in the world without giving away what that thing is.” I think we were suppose use descriptive words to embellish beauty. I decided to have some fun and let you guess what “the thing is”. It's not the most beautiful thing in the world. Personally I think it’s a dead give away…..but tell me what you think!
I still love you but…..
Our Youth has parted
We are no longer content
To ebb together
I used to depend on you
But no more
I used to trust you
But no more
I was in control
But no more
Independent
Of my needs
You now make the decisions
I am at your command
I now pay the way
While you stand
Idly by,
Other times
You’re dormant
I’m ignored
I carry on
Without you
I’m grateful
For our time together
In your youth
Your sleek nature
Attracted me
Now
You’re a liability
Time to
Trade you in
For a new one!
11 comments:
It reminds me of my 1st husband ;) Well done!
It reminds me of my 1st husband ;) Well done!
giggles,
Quite a body of work if I may say so.
Delightful dear girl!
rel
Your bod?
I can no longer depend on my bod as I did when I was younger.
:-)
Very good flow. I ain't guessing.
gautami
Parallel Streams
Ha--I love it! Thanks for letting us ride along. :)
sadness..
peace, kai.
I was thinking it was your car.hmmm
XOXO
I thought about money at first, or a bike... I dunno. It's not as easy as you say! Or maybe it's Friday and my brain is mush!
I am very impressed with your mugs and your cookies, too!
Car? Hairstyle? Hmmm...that word "ebb" keeps drawing my attention - is that the key? I hope you solve this for us soon! lol
Thanks for guessing everyone....Yes to those who thought it was my CAR, that's the correct answer. Now I ask, where is the new black convertable mini cooper the universe promised me!!!!
Hugs to you all Sherrie
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