Grey haired stranger
I scarcely recognize you.
Your once handsome pretty boy face
wearing the weather of your years.
I’m staring hard beyond your swollen slits
of instability.
To see if you’re still in there
behind the coffee stained teeth, wrinkles
and unnatural photo face.
“Who are you now?” I wonder,
not actually giving a damn
You stole my youth,
I let you.
If only I’d run sooner…………
But wait,
The treasure you left me
made it all worth while.
Man of little effort,
a character flaw
that followed you
through divorce
fatherhood
into old age.
You look so much older
than your dad did at your age.
Some may still see you as attractive.
I trace your face, knowing the real you
the generous, yet stingy man.
Oxymoron man,
man who abandoned his most
precious responsibility.
Oh, but you will be forgiven,
released from your past follies.
Time will wax you.
Charm will rescue you.
We had everything and nothing.
We lived a good life then,
separate, together.
Quite attentive,
I was a good consort,
"or was I?"
9 comments:
all of your poems have moved me, but this one sent shivers down my spine. You really have the ability to capture the feel of all your emotions.
excellent post xo
Giggles,
You see life so clearly and even can put a shine on the slime. Cohabitating strangers... too common an occurence!
rel
Giggles,
I think I commented, but where did it go?
Anyway, I enjoyed this piece.
rel
Moving, disconcerting. Your words tell it so well.
So much in this poem ... history, emotion, change ... it is a reminder that in some ways we all are still strangers. xx, JP/deb
Your poem is bursting with emotion of all the dramas shared/endured/survived. Very powerful, my friend. xo
My favourite line is...
The treasure you left me
made it all worth while.
Lovely!
Shelley
My favourite line is...
The treasure you left me
made it all worth while.
Lovely!
Shelley
Excellent!!!! Sometimes the people we think we know are really strangers!
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