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Sunday, January 18, 2009

Sunday Scribblings Pilgrimage

Saturdays, Sun behind the fog sparked thoughts of a metaphor. Threading it into the Sunday Scribblings " Pilgrimage" prompt seemed fitting!

Sun behind the fog

After death

Nothing much makes sense

It’s a fact of life

Unacceptable to the heart

Friends sent me to a psychic

Paid my way, a gift

For my thirty fifth

Ever the skeptic

I locked my armor of distrust

Cautiously she penetrated

A rusted latch

With her oil of wisdom

Opening a sleeve

To possibility

Setting me on a path

Of spirituality

Revealing truth

Obscure, yet accurate

Pointing me

In the direction of inquiry

Past the altitude of religion

Beyond the cloud of deception

Showing me the sun

Behind the fog

It would forever

Light my way

Through the darkest days

Energize me

In my weakest moments

Captivate me with

Ethereal synchronicities

Alter my world

Where the lens

Soiled with confusion


Elevating me




a foundation

of solace

and awareness!


Anonymous said...

that is actualy going far :)

Patois said...

Wonderfully done!

Tumblewords: said...

This is lovely! - sun behind the fog - is truly reflective! Great post!

Lucy said...

oH! is that how you began your spirituality journey? what a beautiful tale of your destined pilgrimage! 35 is so young to lose your parents Sherrie. my heart breaks that you endured that so young. but oh how amazingly strong and insightful you've emerged! your poems are not only moving they also help to empower others from your lessons! xoxo

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

Love your descriptions here, 'soiled with confusion' etc.

Mary Timme said...

Death is the great equalizer! Good journey to you.

keith said...

This is lovely. It reads like a gentle rap!

Linda Jacobs said...

This is beautiful and I love the title!

Dan n Kai said...

Aloha Sherri..
this is just not fair, I'm trying to leave a comment and my mouth is watering at the photo of your baked potato soup..lol..
Ah, forget, I'm off to make a bowl!!

Peace n hugs, Kai

linda may said...

Very nice.

danni said...

this so speaks to me - i am struggling through a very similar situation - nice to hear it from another's perspective!!!

Sioux said...

Wow, Sherrie, that's beautiful...as well as thought provoking. Wow!!

gel said...

"sun behind the fog"
I'm glad the psychic was so helpful for you.
(I'm sorry you lost your dad too young. Many of us are reading about loss from this prompt.)

JP/deb said...

I love this metaphor and insight to your spiritual path - awesome! xx, JP/deb

floreta said...

what a journey! i enjoyed this thoroughly

forgetfulone said...

What a beautiful poem!

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