Sunday Scribblings prompt is "My first act as Queen/ King of the World will be..."
To be read with a passionate voice!
Queens Subjects
As the Queen of hearts for just one day
I’d mute the adults, while the children play
I’d present a throne speech, to all single fathers and mothers
Inform them that children have seniority above all others
I’d parade distressed kids in droves upon my stage
Let them vent with passion, even endorse their rage
About sexual abuse, violence, bullying and neglect
Substance misuse,and emotions guardians fail to detect
I’d force parents to listen without a chance to respond
Hoping new dedication would coerce old thoughts to abscond
Adults would be exposed to current lyrics the full day long
Then quizzed about everything youth knows to be wrong
I'd trust parents would be enlightened and able to concur
That the songs being sung reflect a world that’s obscure
I’d compel folks to atone by serving their children’s needs
Reminding them to thwart their plans when self-interest impedes
To live as though under a microscope of detection
Where all their actions are emulated in their child’s reflection
One free pass of forgiveness liable parents could conceive
Upon restitution of stability and a refuge, where children can believe
Oh but I am the eccentric Queen of numerous extreme dreams
My very first act is to hush our turbulent worlds screams!
13 comments:
What a great post. I really liked it. Thank you for visiting and commenting on my site.
Your majesty! Your words are royally poetic and oh so true. The children in our world could use a Queen like YOU!
A depressing but hope filled read that makes me love my friend just all the more. Thank you for defending us and standing up for us kids.
Very clever poem and your art is terrific! The role of queen suits you. :) xo
yes, indeedy - you'll make a fine queen!
What powerful thoughts. I want you for queen!
All Hail Your Majesty, the Good Queen Sherrie!
Wonderful take on the prompt! xOx
Oh, you've tackled some of the strongest issues here. Sad and beautifully put.
I am doing a deep curtsy before you oh Queen
Your words as always grip the soul with such meaning
You get to the heart of every matter
If only we could encourage your coronation!
XOXOXO
Love and hugs,
Lisa
great writing. I enjoy coming to your page.
Great words//especially the last two lines>
What a good queen you'll make. Very wise. Nice take on the prompt.
WOW! I know it's been used already but hey...this really is VERY clever!!
GREAT job! :-)
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