Deceased at 10 months
Homeless in December...
by Richard Weibe
Single mom getting secondary education to better herself,
while fathers not fiscally or emotionally available.
Foul
Foul is a broken car too expensive to repair
Or a when a favorite TV show suddenly goes off the air
Foul is when your ex refuses to pay his due
Or when he makes no effort to see his child through
Foul is a Christmas when your fridge decides to die
Money for the seasons spent, your left asking why?
yet you can’t remember when you could afford a dentist last
Foul is when you’re at a deficit, by no choice of your own
And it’s a constant struggle to hang onto your home
Foul is all the children whose dads are never present
or ones who reside with them, but are rarely ever pleasant
Foul is menopause when sleeping eight hours is a perk
or when you feel grumpy invade, regretting that you’re a jerk
Foul is when a single parent wishes to buy their kids the world
Instead they get them bargains when they deserve the pearls
Foul is the disabled child who needs constant care
from adventurous loving couple, forced this cross to bear
Foul is when you fight for months to keep your child alive
but in an unexplained mystery, suddenly they die
Foul are the children famished in a country that has ample
or children neglected by parents who are a bad example
Foul are the women raped, forced to bear children before their time
in countries where men squelch a womans rights, still its not a crime
Foul are the trees clear cut so developers can make a mint
While parks aren’t replenished and amenities are taxed for a stint
Foul is the minimum wage where kids are abused by intimidation
When one man gets wealthy while youngsters are their negation
Foul are the cool kids judged, by their tresses, and what they wear
In fact they're the compassionate ones with an artistic flare
Foul are words misconstrued by those you hold so dear
When a noble intention somehow is twisted to become unclear
Foul are injustices of poverty, war, disease, famine and abuse
Without implementing efforts to abolish tribulations or to find a truce
Foul is a narcissistic media rarely accurate or correct
Where ethics need intervention and humanity needs more respect!
11 comments:
foul indeed. i feel every bit of this work.
WOW...what A talent you have, and you certainly don't waste your gift! I am awesrtuck and feel it too. I found your blog thru One world~One Heart...I think we have a lot in common...I Loved reading the Celestine Prophecies, and I am also an independent, free speaking, eclectic, fun, funky, wild (more so in my younger years), and artistic person...sound similar???
Anywho...I enjoyed checking out your blog
Rowan Willow (alter/artist ego)
aka Tiffany
It's all there. Not only foul but pathetic as well. My post refers to the media which focuses on a direction others have chosen and bypasses the important a 'foul' things that are taking place. Great poem and nice choice of fouls.
This is the best post of this prompt that I have read. I am humbled by your talent.
your method of poetry was so powerful! you have the most amazing poetic abilities.
That you are able to take any topic and rhyme it with such precision such intensity Sher.. just wonderful to read your thoughtful creations.
These points you touched on were all truly foul. xox
I'm so pleased you ditched the chick. This is an amazing piece, not just as a chunk of poetry, but as a heartfelt reflection on all that is wrong with society - and fridges! Loved it.
Well written and especially well said!
i like this one!! wow!! good one mom!!love u
Your words are so powerful & I've passed on the love and given you a Roar for Powerful Words award! xx, JP/deb
Profound poetry from the depths of a beautiful soul! XXOO
i was looking for a word to describe this all encompassing poetic post... it is humblng how you have spoken... thank you
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