Taken on November 8th through a drizzled car window on my drive home.
I found this new site through Lilly, Scribble soup for writers block.
I really enjoyed this exercise, I hope you do too!#17: Black is back
What rhymes with black? In two minutes write down as many words that you can think of that rhymes with black. Now in 8 minutes write a paragraph using those words.Black attack smack wrack crack stack plaque
Jack Sack hack lack pack back flack lack Mack knack
rack track whack yak quack
Hovered like plaque
On a decaying tooth
She wished he’d just pack
A sack and be done with it
Tired of all his flack
She wished him gone
The whack to the face
Was the final attack
The switch clicked to off
The marriage was void
She had a stack of reasons
Why it was over
That last smack solidified it all
Her knack to rectify past indifference
Had been squandered for years
On a quack who barely gave a damn
She continued to lay the delicates
On a rack to dry
Much like her life
The essentials were riddled
With life stains
Wracked with disrespect
Tired of the lack
She’d hack into her courage
Turn her back, look for a new Mack
A friend, a lover, a man who
Knew how to giggle and yak!
10 comments:
Good job Giggles...as usual.
Highly entertaining piece.
Wow! What an excellent and fun job!
yeah baby, GIGGLE AND YAK!
That is fabulous. I must check out that link.
You are so creative. Must try this one myself.
Well look at that! Well done, you. It looked like a lot of fun too.
HUGS
Cool exercise and I like your poem a lot! It's very creative. I'm going to try this (but not post it).
I love that type prompt! I may give it a go soon. And that picture is gorgeous. I love the drizzling rain.
Your poem turned out so great! I guess I can identify as I am in a "black" mood right now. You did a terrific job!
NO WAy!! did u really do that in 8 min's?
YOU are amazingly creative!! although that topic always breaks my heart and makes me want to fly north and break Jacks F*&ing Head... This was SO fantastic Baby!
I am going now to check out her site.
Love to you and the biggest hugs! xox
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